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takeda kenji
 Post subject: Green Hair, Yellow Eyes
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5807440/1/G ... ellow_Eyes

I'd really appreciate all feedback and c.c. you guys have to offer.
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I already gave feedback.

By the way, when can we expect Chapter 2?

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This fascinating story about hair dye and eye-color changing contacts?

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Oh Jibri, what am I to do with you??
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Will future chapters tell me how these babbies were formed?

How Airi got pragnent?

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Chapter 2 is up.
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Well I dunno how much for the win it is...you think it's going too fast :P
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Do you plan on making this story an epic or just several chapters? I see that you changed the story from Tenchi losing his virginity to Airi to losing it to Noike. So I'm wondering how the story is going to pan out in the long run. Will it have a long run or a short run?

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I think it'll be less than ten chapters in the end.
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How much longer till the next chapter?

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Over 2,000 words right now, I'll publish when it hits about 3,000.
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I hope you change your mind and decide to make it another epic.

PS - 1,100 posts! FTW! :D :D :D

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Is a new chapter almost ready?

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Chapter 3 published.
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