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TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:14 pm

"It's Going Down"

At night
They do creep
Your defeat
Do you see 'em?
Can you plea?
Do you shake
Like a leaf?
What beef, with me
Do they have?
I can't speak
But they scream
Like a banshee...
And as the sea
The noise echoes...
To the highest degree
Am I crazy?
No one sees
That they want me to bleed
And to scream
Is this a dream?
Are these two separate things?
It's extreme
That they're mean
They radiate in my mind
Like ultraviolet beams
What do I do
To redeem myself?
Or conquer their schemes?

These monsters
These creatures
At the edge of my bed
It's so dreadful..
They just want to rip off my head
And see...
The river of red...
And to shred
My life
My love
By a thread, I am hanging
Like I said...
But where I refuse to be led
Is to my death bed...
So my rights are a woman
Undead
Unwed
Unsaid
And furthermore..
Unread

Cause I have to leave on the light
To escape from their might
In the night
It's not right
And my throat
Gets so tight
And I try
Not to excite myself...
And just hold tightly..
To what I have
Despite all of my blight
I can't even say 'goodnight'
On this site
Cause I know they just might
See their chance
To read me my rights
So they're watching
And waiting
For the slightest slip
Of my mind
So they can ignite
My inner bombs...
So I'm fighting
I don't give up
I'ma punch and I'ma bite
I'll recite them their rights
But it gives me a fright
I'm so polite
But it's going down tonight...

Paintedawg · **Posted:** Fri Jun 27, 2008 12:46 pm

When I saw the title I thought it was that x-cutioner song with mike shinoda from Linkin Park.

Nice Rhyming.

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:29 pm

I've never even heard of that XD

But thanks.

Minagi · **Posted:** Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:30 pm

Nice poem, ECF. I liked it!
It's a song from LP album Reanimation. It's sweet.

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Tue Jul 08, 2008 1:52 pm

Thanks Min.

Scary thing is, I have that cd.

I guess I just forgot, that's a really old cd.

Min, do you have a DeviantArt page?

Minagi · **Posted:** Wed Jul 09, 2008 9:59 am

Pssh me? This dumb redneck? Nope.
Your not mad at me for taking so long to reply to you and everyone elses replies are you?

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:03 pm

XD

Get one!

Why would I be mad? Things like that happen.

I'm just glad you're here.

Minagi · **Posted:** Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:00 pm

^_^
Yay, I'm happy!
So, what's been going on?

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:11 pm

Lol.
You should be.

Nothing really. I've been working on all my art recently, I had stopped for a while.
I'm getting better.

What's been going on with you?

Minagi · **Posted:** Fri Jul 11, 2008 7:19 am

Ooh, you made art? Can you take a pic of it and post it for all of us to enjoy?

OH, boy. Busy. Busy, busy, busy. I'm helping this guy bale hay and it's intresting job. Somethings can go wrong and sometings go right and I wish that it would only stay as "someting going right."
I've had a long brake due to the 4th and some rain, but now were back to work either till tomarrow or Sunday.

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:46 am

Lol. I'll post it all here. I've got most of it on the internet.

Dude, I HATE working with hay. It's so gross. Dries my skin out. (All of my dad's family live on one huge piece of land, and there's hay everywhere.)

Lame.

Minagi · **Posted:** Sat Jul 12, 2008 10:19 am

Ah, so it's on a DeviantArt page then? Mind if ya' send me a link?

...I was going to say... anyways... Is your dads' family in FL or somewhere else? It's hard to picture hay in FL for me apparently.
I don't mind tossin' it or stackin' it. My job is driving the tractor. It's just that he has three and out of two of 'em I like. These two are small and get the job done and I like driving 'em because I feel more comfortable. The other... the other is this ginat one with this huge axel through the tires that can easily rip a barn door down if you get to close. I used to hate driving it, but now I'm driving on the highway and the place I'm taking it to doesn't have to many obstacles. Unlike before where their were fences and going through the barns I had to worry about... the only bad part is none of 'em have good brakes... one actually doesn't even HAVE brakes for a while.
The only part I don't like is leaving really early in the morning or when I'm paying for the gas... besides that its fun.

Paintedawg · **Posted:** Sat Jul 12, 2008 12:05 pm

go through a barn for fun just to get it over with and say it was an "accident".

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Sat Jul 12, 2008 6:28 pm

http://acidcryst.deviantart.com/

There you go.

I'm kinda mad. My grandmother lied to us about taking us out to dinner, so now I have to use what little money I was saving up for my new scanner.

So, no new art for a while.

She's such a hoe-bag.
That's one thing in this world, that can drive me to insanity; when someone doesn't hold to their word.

And my mom also was suppose to pay me to mow our huge ass yard, with a fucking push-mower. I'm not suppose to be in the heat or exerting a lot energy in the heat.

So I got sick, and then she said "No, I'm not paying you, I shouldn't have to."

Bitch, I could have drop kicked her ass right then and there.

I HATE LIARS.

Minagi · **Posted:** Sun Jul 13, 2008 4:38 pm

^^;;;
Now now... you got sick? How's that work? Hope your feelin' better!
By the way, great art! Also enjoyed your poems on there

In response to "paintedawg", I could... but then we would be wasting time reparin' the bugger and he loose more cash. The man has like 2400$ worth of hay in there. Wish he had that before hand and I could get more cash!

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