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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Whatcha think? |
"It's Going Down" At night They do creep Your defeat Do you see 'em? Can you plea? Do you shake Like a leaf? What beef, with me Do they have? I can't speak But they scream Like a banshee... And as the sea The noise echoes... To the highest degree Am I crazy? No one sees That they want me to bleed And to scream Is this a dream? Are these two separate things? It's extreme That they're mean They radiate in my mind Like ultraviolet beams What do I do To redeem myself? Or conquer their schemes? These monsters These creatures At the edge of my bed It's so dreadful.. They just want to rip off my head And see... The river of red... And to shred My life My love By a thread, I am hanging Like I said... But where I refuse to be led Is to my death bed... So my rights are a woman Undead Unwed Unsaid And furthermore.. Unread Cause I have to leave on the light To escape from their might In the night It's not right And my throat Gets so tight And I try Not to excite myself... And just hold tightly.. To what I have Despite all of my blight I can't even say 'goodnight' On this site Cause I know they just might See their chance To read me my rights So they're watching And waiting For the slightest slip Of my mind So they can ignite My inner bombs... So I'm fighting I don't give up I'ma punch and I'ma bite I'll recite them their rights But it gives me a fright I'm so polite But it's going down tonight... |
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| Author: | Paintedawg [ Fri Jun 27, 2008 12:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
When I saw the title I thought it was that x-cutioner song with mike shinoda from Linkin Park. Nice Rhyming. |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
I've never even heard of that XD But thanks. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
Nice poem, ECF. I liked it! It's a song from LP album Reanimation. It's sweet. |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Tue Jul 08, 2008 1:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
Thanks Min. Scary thing is, I have that cd. I guess I just forgot, that's a really old cd. Min, do you have a DeviantArt page? |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Wed Jul 09, 2008 9:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
Pssh me? This dumb redneck? Nope. Your not mad at me for taking so long to reply to you and everyone elses replies are you? |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
XD Get one! Why would I be mad? Things like that happen. I'm just glad you're here. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
^_^ Yay, I'm happy! So, what's been going on? |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
Lol. You should be. Nothing really. I've been working on all my art recently, I had stopped for a while. I'm getting better. What's been going on with you? |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Fri Jul 11, 2008 7:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
Ooh, you made art? Can you take a pic of it and post it for all of us to enjoy? OH, boy. Busy. Busy, busy, busy. I'm helping this guy bale hay and it's intresting job. Somethings can go wrong and sometings go right and I wish that it would only stay as "someting going right." I've had a long brake due to the 4th and some rain, but now were back to work either till tomarrow or Sunday. |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
Lol. I'll post it all here. I've got most of it on the internet. Dude, I HATE working with hay. It's so gross. Dries my skin out. (All of my dad's family live on one huge piece of land, and there's hay everywhere.) Lame. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Sat Jul 12, 2008 10:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
Ah, so it's on a DeviantArt page then? Mind if ya' send me a link? ...I was going to say... anyways... Is your dads' family in FL or somewhere else? It's hard to picture hay in FL for me apparently. I don't mind tossin' it or stackin' it. My job is driving the tractor. It's just that he has three and out of two of 'em I like. These two are small and get the job done and I like driving 'em because I feel more comfortable. The other... the other is this ginat one with this huge axel through the tires that can easily rip a barn door down if you get to close. I used to hate driving it, but now I'm driving on the highway and the place I'm taking it to doesn't have to many obstacles. Unlike before where their were fences and going through the barns I had to worry about... the only bad part is none of 'em have good brakes... one actually doesn't even HAVE brakes for a while. The only part I don't like is leaving really early in the morning or when I'm paying for the gas... besides that its fun. |
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| Author: | Paintedawg [ Sat Jul 12, 2008 12:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
go through a barn for fun just to get it over with and say it was an "accident". |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Sat Jul 12, 2008 6:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
http://acidcryst.deviantart.com/ There you go. I'm kinda mad. My grandmother lied to us about taking us out to dinner, so now I have to use what little money I was saving up for my new scanner. So, no new art for a while. She's such a hoe-bag. That's one thing in this world, that can drive me to insanity; when someone doesn't hold to their word. And my mom also was suppose to pay me to mow our huge ass yard, with a fucking push-mower. I'm not suppose to be in the heat or exerting a lot energy in the heat. So I got sick, and then she said "No, I'm not paying you, I shouldn't have to." Bitch, I could have drop kicked her ass right then and there. I HATE LIARS. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Sun Jul 13, 2008 4:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Whatcha think? |
^^;;; Now now... you got sick? How's that work? Hope your feelin' better! By the way, great art! Also enjoyed your poems on there In response to "paintedawg", I could... but then we would be wasting time reparin' the bugger and he loose more cash. The man has like 2400$ worth of hay in there. Wish he had that before hand and I could get more cash! |
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