More random crap.
My first RP character!
Even though I don't RP.
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| Author: | Minagi [ Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:38 pm ] |
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Comix that was awesome This just came to me: I stand in the middle of a field Nothing, but a sea of bronze Grass flowing with the ryhtm of the wind I feel Your presence swell within me I feel lifted off the ground I feel a light burst from my chest Tears run down my face Not from pain, but from sheer joy! OH the blissful encounter has a risen my Sprit! Thank you for letting me be your own! Words can not describe my gratitude... That is why I now weep for I can never give you something in return for this extraordinary gift However, the lovely part is you don't care as long I am yours and you are mine Tell me does it suck? Does it make any sense? Does it need adjustment? Please critique me... be as cruel as a British nanny |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Random crap... |
I like it. Good imagery. And you portrayed your emotion well. YAY FOR MINAGI! |
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| Author: | supergirlcomix [ Mon Oct 06, 2008 9:20 pm ] |
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It's been FOREVER since I wrote a DECENT poem. XD And I liked it Minagi. I agree with Chibi. The imagery pwns. |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Tue Oct 07, 2008 12:47 am ] |
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It takes a bit to get back in the swing of it. Then it will be as natural as changing your panties. XD |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Tue Oct 07, 2008 12:49 am ] |
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More random crap. My first RP character! Even though I don't RP.
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| Author: | Minagi [ Tue Oct 07, 2008 9:55 am ] |
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I gave you my review last nihgt, but I'll tell it again: it's cute and new! |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:52 pm ] |
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Lol. I still can't believe something so cute and colourful came from these hands. XD I'm so proud of this. I'm working on another one too! |
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| Author: | bkev [ Tue Oct 07, 2008 6:48 pm ] |
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It looks good, but the one thing that's bothering me is the eye. Not only does it lack the hwite edge of the other one, but it's not hidden by the hair. It doesn't need to be all the way, but it just seems odd right now. |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Tue Oct 07, 2008 6:51 pm ] |
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Aw man.. I had put the white on that eye.. I must have deleted that layer and not noticed the change.. It's too late now.. And the hair and eye thing. While I was doing it, it looked okay. And last night I realized I didn't like it. But what's done is done. On my other ones I won't do that. |
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| Author: | supergirlcomix [ Tue Oct 07, 2008 9:31 pm ] |
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GAHH!! LOOK AT THOSE PROPORTIONS!! AND THE HANDS!! AND THAT HAIR!! Ahhhhh!! It's GORGEOUS!! |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:50 am ] |
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Yesh, it's so cute ^.^ |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Wed Oct 08, 2008 12:05 pm ] |
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Thank you! Girl, it took me ALL day. From the time I woke up, til like.. 4am And air is so hard. I spent ALL night just one my new pictures hair. XD |
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| Author: | supergirlcomix [ Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:18 pm ] |
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Hair is one of my favorite things to draw. ^_^ |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Wed Oct 08, 2008 10:37 pm ] |
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I can understand the hair. You can make it as funky or colorful as you want! |
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| Author: | TheEvilChibifox [ Thu Oct 09, 2008 2:01 am ] |
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Don't get me wrong. I love hair. It's my favorite thing to look at. Along with eyes. But digitally without a tablet is hard. |
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