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Minagi · **Posted:** Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:56 am

So, I got bored one night and I just started to write. This what I came up with.

Babylon

Preface
Hame came out of nowhere. He was like a dog, tearing at a piece of meat. No... he was like a pack of wild dogs. He cut through them all like a blade through fog. After the carnage he stood in the center of the plain of the slain. He had a smile on his face like an artist completeing a masterpiece. This was his masterpiece, the remains of the fallen. Blood dribbled from the corner of his mouth. His companion feasted on the remains. The wind picked up and his hair waved in the wind. His smile winded into a more sinister one. The created his own new bliss. The sun was setting when the slaughter began. The fallen were now covered. The darkness was now their casket. However, when the darkness came down for the fallens vail, it become his vail. His red eyes shown from the darkness, like two remaing glowing embers trying to remaine alive from a fierce fire.
I have known the name of this boy, who was more of a beast, but after tonight a new name came to mind: Babylon

What do you guys think of it? I'm building a story off of it, but does this intigue any of you guys?

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Fri Sep 12, 2008 1:34 am

As much as I HATE reading...
I read all of that, and it was interesting.

Honestly, if you asked me to RE-READ it.. I wouldn't, simply for the fact that I hate reading.

It was good though.

Cerebrate Araq · **Posted:** Fri Sep 12, 2008 7:15 am

Looks like it's about a Babylonian vampire.

Minagi · **Posted:** Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:36 am

The character is kinda like a vampire. He's Scottish, not Babylonian however. The name Babylon is just a name I use to describe how powerful he can become.

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Fri Sep 12, 2008 2:38 pm

Haha.
I bet my boyfriend would like to read this.

Want me to have him read it, Minagi?

Minagi · **Posted:** Sun Sep 21, 2008 4:35 pm

Go for it, it's for people to read

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Sun Sep 21, 2008 8:35 pm

I keep forgetting to have him read it.
XD

I'll give it another go.

Minagi · **Posted:** Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:48 am

OK, but have 'em be honest with me, ight?Thanks for spreading my plauge!

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Mon Sep 22, 2008 4:11 pm

He wouldn't be dishonest.

And no problem!

Minagi · **Posted:** Tue Sep 23, 2008 1:16 am

Domo arigato, ECF-domo
... Japanese kicking back in again... alright I'm back in!

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Tue Sep 23, 2008 3:12 pm

Haha, no problem.

I've had that nickname for FOREVER.

Minagi · **Posted:** Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:23 pm

ECF-domo?
I had one friend who still called me the kiddy name... what was that called again?

TheEvilChibifox · **Posted:** Wed Sep 24, 2008 12:06 am

No, just ECF. XD

I don't know?

Minagi · **Posted:** Mon Sep 29, 2008 2:12 am

... Where's my portable Japanese translator... here he is *pulls out Japanese dude and sits him on desk*... c'mon... do linguistics...

supergirlcomix · **Posted:** Mon Sep 29, 2008 12:27 pm

Did it have a -kun or a -chan?

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