Ooooo.... gore... I like all ready!

Yeah, it'll e very vivd, hopefully.

...Lee can I take away your glory real quick? I have a lil' "poem" I want to post.

I lie here broken
In the dark
Nothing around me
Just pitch black
I can barely see my hands
I lie limp and naked (no comments!)
I look up for light... nothing, but black
I look around
Nothing, but the black
I look at my hands
...what have I done?
My hands shake violenty
My eyes fill of tears
I place my head in my hands
I sob relentsly
I killed it
I killed the spirit within me
She killed it (no ref. to my paradox!)
Carmilia killed it
She dragged me down into a pit of adultry
She molested me
She raped me
She defiled me
I was her toy and try to escape for the Light!
I don't want to be in the dark, but in the Light!
OH, beautiful Light! Won't you rescue me from my captor
I hear footsteps
I look and there she is
Her plale body moves closer and closer
Her long dark hair covers her dark and evil eyes
She grabs ahold me I try to fight back, but I am over powered
OH, beautiful Light won't you rescue me or do I have to rescue myself?

Interesting.

I like it. It's just like everything you write though. Not necessarily a bad thing though.

Is it because I write in a first person narrative way?

I believe that's EXACTLY why.

I mean, it's okay to, but you should try different perspectives.

I wondered... p'ok.

Don't stop writing your way though. XD

I don't like it either. I need to find a better way to do this then saying, "I" so much.

I know what you mean.

Pick a subject, that doesn't involve humans, and write about it. Try that. Nature perhaps?

I liked it.

The first person made me think of you though Minagi, not that it's bad to think of you.

I just don't want to think of you raped. O_o

It was representing me and me stupidity.
Probably I was. Who knows?

Yeah, not exactly a pleasant though.

No...no...
Anyway, about the "not using the human emotion" bit... what up with that?