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| Author: | Tseyluna Lee [ Mon Nov 24, 2008 11:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
Well see, that's the thing. I'm not too sure yet. But it's going to be something along the lines of horror/suspense. Maybe just a lot of gore. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Mon Nov 24, 2008 11:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
Ooooo.... gore... I like all ready! |
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| Author: | Tseyluna Lee [ Mon Nov 24, 2008 11:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
Yeah, it'll e very vivd, hopefully. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
...Lee can I take away your glory real quick? I have a lil' "poem" I want to post. I lie here broken In the dark Nothing around me Just pitch black I can barely see my hands I lie limp and naked (no comments!) I look up for light... nothing, but black I look around Nothing, but the black I look at my hands ...what have I done? My hands shake violenty My eyes fill of tears I place my head in my hands I sob relentsly I killed it I killed the spirit within me She killed it (no ref. to my paradox!) Carmilia killed it She dragged me down into a pit of adultry She molested me She raped me She defiled me I was her toy and try to escape for the Light! I don't want to be in the dark, but in the Light! OH, beautiful Light! Won't you rescue me from my captor I hear footsteps I look and there she is Her plale body moves closer and closer Her long dark hair covers her dark and evil eyes She grabs ahold me I try to fight back, but I am over powered OH, beautiful Light won't you rescue me or do I have to rescue myself? |
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| Author: | Tseyluna Lee [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:13 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
Interesting. I like it. It's just like everything you write though. Not necessarily a bad thing though. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:15 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
Is it because I write in a first person narrative way? |
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| Author: | Tseyluna Lee [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:22 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
I believe that's EXACTLY why. I mean, it's okay to, but you should try different perspectives. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:23 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
I wondered... p'ok. |
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| Author: | Tseyluna Lee [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:26 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
Don't stop writing your way though. XD |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:36 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
I don't like it either. I need to find a better way to do this then saying, "I" so much. |
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| Author: | Tseyluna Lee [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
I know what you mean. Pick a subject, that doesn't involve humans, and write about it. Try that. Nature perhaps? |
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| Author: | supergirlcomix [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 9:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
I liked it. The first person made me think of you though Minagi, not that it's bad to think of you. I just don't want to think of you raped. O_o |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
It was representing me and me stupidity. Probably I was. Who knows? |
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| Author: | Tseyluna Lee [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
Yeah, not exactly a pleasant though. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Frackin' crack! |
No...no... Anyway, about the "not using the human emotion" bit... what up with that? |
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