That's sad that a friend of yours died so young... and the song shows your sorrow. It's wonderful. Good job
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| Author: | <3kittie<3 [ Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | haunting memories |
this one went in the casket of my friend who died before my birthday..... memories haunt me killing me slowly seeing your face that one last time today is a gift thats why its the present but when your not here its not the same i stand at your casket the peace in your smile but i know its not real your life not fully lived how could you come back again? how can i stand when my balance is gone? how could you say to me in whispers barely heard that all are next? the time has come once again say to me death will come the end is near the light will come heavens will shine hells will burn how can i stay in the open with fear? how can i be when you are so near? the reaper has told me all to tell how can i stay in a world meant to fail now i understand why you said it to me no others would know its your time, you must go you must go please just leave i'm sorry your gone but you had to go *now u understand the world around me turns nothing gone wrong in the hearts if the others *repeat i hope my friends is resting in peace |
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| Author: | bkev [ Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:49 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
That's sad that a friend of yours died so young... and the song shows your sorrow. It's wonderful. Good job
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| Author: | <3kittie<3 [ Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
thanks! a lot of my works are sad..... unfortunately lol |
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| Author: | bkev [ Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
Sad memories can lead to great memoirs... and such. An example would be this song you wrote. |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
I enjoyed it, after listening to it a couple I feel your longing to see your friend again and a small sense of betrayl, a betrayl that your friend left you... not this person's choice of course OO' Thank you for sharing, kittie ^_^! I love to hear fresh, new, up-beat talent emerging instead from this hades like main stream KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
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| Author: | <3kittie<3 [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 1:22 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
thanks......half the time i don't even know what i'm writing til i'm done...... this is after a great period of depression....... he died a few days before my birthday.......so you can imagine....... |
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| Author: | crumpets the wise [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:09 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
Someone mentioned hear... Any soundbits? Or left to the imagination? |
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| Author: | <3kittie<3 [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
left for your imagination...... sorry...... |
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| Author: | Minagi [ Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
. . . T.T |
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| Author: | crumpets the wise [ Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: haunting memories |
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